We have 2 concepts to do business with, but I do not know which one POST should use/expand upon.
The first one I made I am rather doubtfull with regards to. Here it is usually:
http: //eddybones. freeserverhost. com/bwd/
The problem usually it look so just like Brak’s old small business site and I don’t wish to be acused of coldly copying it. Of course it was encouraged by his for the reason that I liked it a lot.
Your second one:
http: //eddybones. freeserverhost. com/notion_web_design/
Kind of bland. I’ll do something positive about the tacky repeating bg only use this one particular. It’s just your filler now simply because I thought the item wasn’t that harmful…
I’m also having a new layout around my Photoshop category at school which might in fact be as good as these two…
MY PARTNER AND I purchased a area and hosting right now from 34sp. com, and so the name of my business shall be Notion Web Design it doesn’t matter which layout POST chose. So which one Or ought to be a just resume the drawing board
edit Of course the adds shall be gone once WE move onto the revolutionary host.
I do not know what it is usually, but I prefer the first one, it only looks more specialist… granted, I’m not only a big fan of this text… but thats very easily changed.
Goodness me, 38 thread views and finally a reply! Thanks HP for ones opinion. I think the primary looks better also. The second has been just thrown together and I believe I was just excited about it because it is the first site this I’ve made that isn’t butchered in Mac IE.
I favor the first just one better too, I don’t love that text possibly, but the next ones text and in some cases in the graphics bothered me extra, but good job….
In short: first one is way better, text is bad. Second one needs some more color and elements besides text.
Thanks for that comments everyone. A great deal appreciated. I’ll complement the first for the time being, change the text message, and also the logo to match the business identify. I’ll toss available a mockup of the new design and obtain input on this perhaps tomorrow or maybe soon thereafter.
Hmm, a great deal for " next week or soon thereafter. "
Here’s the new one: http: //notionwebdesign. com/test/
As well as old one: http: //notionwebdesign. com/
Would really appreciate input on which is more delightful. I’ll be fully developing the new one anyway for the reason that I’ve managed to create it into a good assignment for school, but I can keep with the original furthermore. I like these individuals both, so I am undecided.
editI’ll change the banner around the first one because I believe it’s crap.
The first link is great- internet websites that integrate good photography in to the layout are quite powerful. One thing that I’m undecided about – that menu system offers text that just seems outside of place.
Quite a few comments:
1) Clearly the new one is far more eye-grabbing. I much like the picture. Your logo design is well-designed, but form of freaks me out it appears to be an insect or perhaps something; -)
2) Nice picture sequence with the rollovers, which will be fine.
3) Unsure about the text layout, which I can’t read as a result of language barrier. You could possibly stick with the actual older text structure.
4) Entire, good start. Hope my comments helped a lttle bit, but they’re supposed to be taken which has a grain of that coarsest salt.
Allow me to know if I can help.
Regards,
J
Thanks for that comments guys.
Just noticed that one of several text boxes is due to a screwy placement in IE… edit Apparently a lot more than just that is definitely screwy in IE /edit Didn’t check it so far. As to the actual language, that’s only filler text. I haven’t created this particular copy yet. I’m sure what I need to say, but actually telling it without beating an old horse is the particular difficult part.
Please note: Just fixed two with the 3 known IE pesky insects. The bottom reddish div is still out of aiming, but I’ll handle that another time. This is the first time I’ve had to resort to hacks in making everything look suitable. What an infuriating thing. Makes me feel a lttle bit incompetent…